NDP 2012.03 - NDP #1: Daniel vs Intan

Description: A close NDP fight between Intan and Daniel. Victor: Daniel


The roar of the announcer is met with the cries of the crowd as the cameras begin to roll. The scene? The Continental Wrestling Alliance, and the home of the CWA /RIOT!/ Tonight, live in Memphis TN, was a fight between two relative unknowns. Situated in a wrestling arena, two fighters were in each corner of the ring. The announcer, from his table, bellows out into the mic. "Ladies and Gentlemen, tonight we have a Neo Development Project fight between two young upstarts in the world of fighting! In this corner..."

The camera zooms in on a African-American dressed in a pair of slacks, a black button-up shirt, and a pair of suspected, handing over a concealed pistol to the refree. "We have Daniel Jack! A detective by trade, the gumshoe practices Todoh-Ryuu Kobojutsu! The only championship belt holder for the Dojo, he is a rising star in the fighting ring, and hopes to use the winnings, and get this, to replace his old suit!"

Daniel Jack looks across the wrestling ring, snapping his suspenders. "What's the noise of the floor, scuzzy? I'll try to keep this discreet!"

COMBATSYS: Daniel has started a fight here.

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Daniel           0/-------/-------|

And when the camera switches to the other side of the ring, it focuses on a teenage, Indonesian girl. She┬┤s initially unaware that the camera has turned on, until her name is announced. "And in the other, we have Intan. Another new face to the world of fighting, she doesn't let know much about why she joined, but she dual wields Krisses. Watch out for those knives, they might get painful."

And as he speaks, Intan throws those ornate ceremonial weapons into the air, making a backflip and landing with the two weapons in her hands again, a quick turn around and she swishes them forwards.

The girl licks her lips and starts to pace, observing Daniel quietly as she keeps moving those weapons around, they're defensive for now, as Intan makes no moves to engage in the assault. Yet, anyway. A smirk suddenly forms as she isssues a challenge, "Bring it, mister Jack."

COMBATSYS: Intan has joined the fight here.

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Intan            0/-------/-------|-------\-------\0           Daniel

COMBATSYS: Intan focuses on her next action.

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Intan            0/-------/-------|-------\-------\0           Daniel

"Call me Daniel, sweetheart."

The detective lets the judge give the signal, inspecting his opponent with a fully serious presence. As the judge announces the fight is live, Daniel Jack doesn't waste time. Promptly turning around, hopes behind the post in his corner. Gripping it tightly, he looks across the ring, and gives a wave. With a terse voice, he calls out to his opponent.


The detective suddenly kicks the post HARD. Knocking the post clean off, it starts to snap away from the detective... and right for his opponent. The announcer goes nuts at this opening. "And Daniel Jack, as his opening move, DESTROYS the ring, using it against his own oppnent! This is highly illegal in the sport of wrestling, ladies and gentlemen, but looks to be fair game in the world of the Neo Development Project! How will Intan react?!"

COMBATSYS: Intan fails to slow Thrown Object from Daniel with Throwing the Kris.
- Power fail! -

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Intan            0/-------/------=|-------\-------\0           Daniel

Intan quickly puts one of her two main Krisses between her teeth and is about to draw a third so she can throw it at the incoming post as she is hit right in the face with that post. She winces as she staggers back, losing whatever advantage she might have had. She drops that third Kris, there look to be plenty more where that came from, and takes the main kris back in her hand. "I'm not your sweetheart, lover boy." She answers, a fiery look in her eyes. "I'm so much more."

Daniel Jack dusts off his shoulders as the post strikes Intan hard in the face. The audience roars as the announcer rants. "She takes it right in the face! But that isn't slowing her down, ladies and gentlemen! What is Daniel Jack going to do now that it is obvious dirty tricks isn't going to slow her down!"

The detective responds in stride.

"If I had a dime for every time a woman told me that, I'd start to think it's a racket. What makes you any different than every dame that flashes a knife in my general direction?" Daniel Jack finally closing in on his opponent, moving in not just towards Intan... but towards the Kris. Kicking the weapon up, the gumshoe grabs it, inspecting it. "What is this, a knife? Give me a little history lesson, won't you?" Gripping it by the handle, the detective lunges in, thrusting the blade right for the Intan... as best as he can. Which isn't bad, per say.

(It is pretty bad.)

COMBATSYS: Daniel successfully hits Intan with Light Random Weapon.

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Intan            0/-------/----===|-------\-------\0           Daniel

And Intan takes another blow, the weapon hitting somewhere where it hurts some. "Oh, I don't know." She answers as she maneuvers around her opponent, "Perhaps it's because I actually know how to use one?" And as she mentions this, she rushes forwards, trying to grab Danial by the neck to push him down on the Kris that's waiting there. "Oh, and these blades aren't regular knives, lover boy. They're ancestral weapons." She winks and makes a backflip.

COMBATSYS: Intan successfully hits Daniel with Armed Combo.
- Power hit! -

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Intan            0/-------/---====|==-----\-------\0           Daniel

Daniel was getting pro with a strange weapon? If this keeps up, he might end up a bit cocky. The announce continues with his vigorous commentary. "Daniel turns Intan's own weapons against her! The detective is showing his downright dirty tactics here! Is this how a student of Todoh fights? Or maybe this is what he needs on the streets!" Daniel Jack draws blood on the teenager, using the opportunities as they come. Unfortunately, Intan was taking her opportunities as well. "ANd INTAN FOR THE KILL!" Came the cry as the detective suddenly finds himself seized, and brought HARD down into one of the Kris.

It was the wink that did him in.

Grabbing his throat, the detective looks downright surprise. Blood was gushing from his neck, and was not slowing down. The initial cut barely hurt; the detective understood that. But he knew as time went on; things were going to look bleaker and bleaker for him. Releasing his neck, he lets the blood flow, winces slightly. "Cut the sweet talk, you damn peach. I'm way too old for you, and twice as talented. I got enough trouble with stalkers your age as it is."

The detective remembers Marz, briefly.

Daniel JAck tenses up as he drops into the defensive stance of Todoh; a straddle-stance posturing of Aikido. Tossing away the reckless sleuth improvising, he compensates with real skill; shooting forth with a palm strike, he immediately chains into a hand chop. Swinging his leg around, the detective unleashes a straight kick, attempting to catch Intan with a simple combination strike, before finishing off with a roundhouse kick. Desperately offensive, yes. BUt Daniel needed to keep himself unpredictable.

This was the big leagues now.

COMBATSYS: Daniel successfully hits Intan with Zoot Suit Riot.

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Intan            0/-------/-======|===----\-------\0           Daniel

Trying to block the incoming assault, Intan lacks success. It's not too horrible, but she is being worn down. "If you've got that much talent, Daniel, love. Then why don't you have anything to show for it?" She answers him as she gives another wink. "I'm just a teenager, and a girl to boot. Shouldn't you be making quick work of me, or are my feminine wiles too tough to resist?"

Enough taunting for the moment, Intan moves closer to Daniel, she rushes past him, going into a sliding across him to get easier access to her target. With a quick flash of steel, she tries to wound the tendon on Daniel's achilles heel. It doesn't take her long to get up again either.

COMBATSYS: Daniel blocks Intan's Weakening Slash.

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Intan            0/-------/=======|====---\-------\0           Daniel

"Looks like Intan is having trouble with Daniel Jack folks! But Daniel isn't looking so hot with all that blood gushing out! The detective is bleeding out like a stuck pig! Now he is going back to the Todoh-Ryuu core, and I got to say, I am not impressed! Is that all the Todoh arts have to offer? Improved weapons, and a few punches and kicks?! Meanwhile, Intan goes for the tendon strike! That's where the real talent is!"

Daniel Jack is beginning to get annoyed.

The sleuth lands the final kick, the four blows being weak individually, but powerful when combined. Chipping away at the very deadly fighter, he begins to grow woozy. The blood loss was starting to approach him, slowing him down so slightly. "Around sweeties like you? I prefer to take my time; it seems gosh-darn rude to go wham, bam, thank you ma'am, you dig me?" The detective kicks up the leftover post that he sent towards Intan before, catching the oncoming Kris that was diving right for his hamstring with the wrestling post. Fortunately, he doesn't get his tendon cut; though the rest of the leg doesn't appreciate the additional blood loss. Wincing, the detective stomps forward, trying to pin down those terrible claws as he lets fly a wide, two-handed backswing right for Intan's face, trying to knock her away.

Golf style.

COMBATSYS: Intan dodges Daniel's Random Weapon.

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Intan            0/-------/=======|=====--\-------\0           Daniel

Still being low to the ground, Intan ducks right below the incoming attack. "Oh, I dig you. I've got one issue though." She answers as she starts to circle around Daniel, a smirk playing on her face. "You know, I thought it was the men who were supposed to be doing the penetration." And in that moment, her blade goes for Daniel's gut. It's a swift stab for sure, and after its pulled out, Intan steps back again.

COMBATSYS: Daniel interrupts Random Strike from Intan with Jumping Jack Flash.

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Intan            1/-----==/=======|======-\-------\0           Daniel

"Sweetie, nobody penetrates Daniel Jack without his consent!"

The swing of the post shooting over her head, the detective releases the post. He takes the opportunities as they come, and in this case, it was better to ditch the makeshift club. This chick was being a regular charmer, the detective thinks to himself as the lady lunges in, kris out.

Gedo kids usually were.

The detective takes a shallow piercing wound to the torso, now bleeding from both his gut and his neck. Crossing his eyes, the detective catches Intan, stopping her from getting too far in. Twisting around, the detective carries the girl up in the air, rebalancing himself and herself as he readies the attack. Roaring as he bleeds like a stuck pig, the detective hurls his opponent down HARD, roaring his own makeshift name of the attack.


Intan takes the blow and staggers some. She smirks though as she makes a backflip. "You consented by signing up for this match, love." She tells him. She doesn't move to attack, in fact, it looks like she's taking the time for a quick breather. Still wary, she doesn't let her guard down. "But you're the guy who's going around hitting young ladies. It's a good thing I'm not defenseless, or you might have had assault charges on your name."

COMBATSYS: Intan gains composure.

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Intan            1/-------/=======|======-\-------\0           Daniel

Daniel Jack somehow manages not to turn bright red.

It is uncanny.
As Intan slows down, Daniel Jack finds the opportunity to speed up. The announcer highlights his advance. "After a missed swing, the pair continues to go at it. OH! Look at that counter throw! Intan hits the mat hard! But Daniel Jack is bleeding out pretty bad here folks! I don't know how much longer he can last without slowing down!"

Daniel Jack REALLY hates the announcer.

Keeping the pressure on the girl, the detective grimaces, fighting the hotness manifesting under the collar. "Tell you what; throw the fight heartbreaker, and I'll spend the night in the slammer. Fair trade?" The detective swings his left arm over, keeping up the pressure as orange chi flares out, arcing towards Intan.


COMBATSYS: Intan slows Kasane Ate from Daniel with Throwing the Kris.
Glancing Hit

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Intan            1/------=/=======|=======\-------\0           Daniel

With another one of those spare blades thrown to intercept the blast of Chi, Intan still gets hit by the attack. At least it's not a full-blown strike and she smirks. "Look, sweetheart. You can keep trying to be the better man. But fact remains that you're the only man." She takes a step back, "If you were a real gentleman, you'd throw the fight and showed you know how to treat the fairer sex properly." Another wink.

"And Daniel Jack unleashes another wave of energy. The audience seems to really love the chi, though it is pretty generic!" The detective finds his energy blast somewhat scattered as the woman lets fly another Kris blade. The detective grumbles; those blades were doing a good job making it hard to engage in the woman at a distance. The detective decides to take a risk; why not take a risk, after all? Outside of the horrible bleeding out. Growing more and more woozy, the detectives come out cold, brutal, and cutting like a Kris to the heart. "Well I hate to break it to you,lady."

"I'm no Gentleman."

Stepping in as the Kris hits the ground, the detective lashes out with both hands for the teenager's right arm. Should he get a grip, he would positions his hands; one on the wrist, another on right about the elbow. With a sharp, aggresive snap, he would attempt to not only wrench the wrist into a disarm; but break the arm at the elbow, dislocating it cleanly. And if he could keep that grip...

He would begin the submission hold.

COMBATSYS: Daniel successfully hits Intan with Mad Jack Crack.

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Intan            1/----===/=======|=======\-------\0           Daniel

The submission hold appears to be successful enough, and Intan is thrown to the ground. She manages to slip out even so, and returns to counterattack. She's fast, all of a sudden, as both of her knives rush out in an assault that seems to be designed to bring pain. Lots of it. It's filled with raw energy, the energy of someone who appears to have been born to fight. Once she's done, she makes a flip back. "Try harder."

COMBATSYS: Intan successfully hits Daniel with Relentless Assault.

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Intan            0/-------/----===|=======\==-----\1           Daniel

"You don't think I am serious, scuzzy?"

Daniel Jack wrenches more and more of the fight out of Intan. The detective had enough experience on the steers to know that where Chi and Punching fails, a good submission hold will always compensate. Other than Faolan. Who knocked his block off. But it isn't enough to knock Intan out of the fight, and soon enough, she slips free. Already she is driving back into the detective; but Daniel Jack has a trick for just an occasion. "Perhaps you should see the TRUE MIGHT of TODOH!" The detective crosses his arms, and.... holds still.

And for a brief moment, he seems to join the crowd.

"Daniel Jack gets a submission hold, but it just isn't good enough! Now Intan comes back to tear the detective apart but- where is he? Where did Daniel Jack go? I see him, but... what is he doing?" Daniel Jack's outline seems to blur, his appearance losing both detail and color. As the relentless assault comes to, each blow is akin to not hitting flesh, but hitting a prop in the background of a stage. Yes, it is would be akin to Intan attacking one of the audience members. As her assault begins to wane, the detective surges back into color, his body bleeding profuseful from surface wounds. But despite the thousand cuts, it was clear that the detective avoided the worst of the attack. Growling, he looks at her. "I guess it is the time for me to...

"Mean Business."

Suddenly, Daniel Jack stomps, rattling the entire ring. Not only are the two Kris before knocked into the air, but ALL of the ring posts, including the one knocked free. As the posts spring towards the center, the detective begins snatching each of the props out of the air, and hurling them towards Intan. Kris comes after Kris, post after post. The detective was literally trying to tear apart the very wrestling ring, bringing down the whole house with his frenzy of random objects. The avalanche of items ends with a single, loose item, flung from the detective's front pocket of his shirt.

A lit cigarette.

COMBATSYS: Daniel successfully hits Intan with Mean Business.

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Intan            0/-------/-======|=------\-------\0           Daniel

It's a last ditch effort as Intan fails to move out of the way of the incoming rampage. She tries to, but it's hella hard. Her eyes narrow as she stares at Daniel. With a blitz of light she rushes towards her adversary of the night, and she makes stab after stab after stab. It's not pretty, it's very ruthless, and it's also pretty clearly an attempt to bring Daniel down with her, as she doesn't look like she'll be standing after this has unfolded.

All she can do is hope Daniel isn't standing after her assault anymore either. At least, not more than a few brief moments.

COMBATSYS: Intan can no longer fight.

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Daniel           0/-------/------=|

COMBATSYS: Daniel blocks Intan's Relentless Assault.

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Daniel           0/-------/----===|

The frenzy leaves Daniel Jack exposed.

No matter.

The detective levels the ring, as the announcer screams. "That's an illegal manuver! He is breaking every rule there is in the world of wrestling!" As the debris lands, the detective slows down.... and prepares himself for that last wave from the girl. With no more tricks up his sleeves, the detective has only one choice: Throw up his guard, and hope for the best. As it turns out; that is all he has.


The second frenzy rips apart what little defenses Daniel has left, reopening the wounds she already torn open before. Struggling against the onslaught, his clothing turns to tatters, his body bleeding more and more. At least his gut and neck had slowed down; there might have been not enough blood for the rest of him. As the assault draws to a close, and Intan collapses, the detective holds steady. Wavering. On the edge.

Before finally holding himself up high.

The announcer roars. "WINNER! DANIEL JACK HAS COME ON TOP! HE HAS WON THE $100,000 PRIZE! NOW HE CAN FINALLY AFFORD A REAL MARTIAL ART!" As the judge comes to the stage to throw up the detective's hand... the student of Todoh grabs a mic, and spits back, pointing at the announcer.

"Do not insult the WAY of TODOH, scuzzy!"

COMBATSYS: Daniel takes no action.

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Daniel           0/-------/----===|

COMBATSYS: Daniel has ended the fight here.

Log created on 23:38:55 03/30/2012 by Intan, and last modified on 21:56:13 04/04/2012.